Awesome Poem!

I got an awesome poem from someone named "redvelvetfan" who I think is really sweet judging by the email I got from her. I'm gonna show you guys her poem, so tell me what you think!

 

A Ray of Sunshine

I hear the birds tweet

I see the trees that are pine

My heart skips a beat

I see a ray of sunshine

 

Children running in the park

Their voices together chime

It's definitely not dark

With this ray of sunshine

 

They all play together

As they sing nursery rhymes

They all love each other

Like a ray of sunshine

 

Night time is here

And everything is fine

You heart has no fear

Because of that ray of sunshine